Logline for "Death Rides a Pale Horse" - Script Note #5

At the moment, to be honest, it's a temporary logline, primarily because it might evolve as the screenplay develops. However, what excites me is that I now have a logline. Enough of the story has come together in my mind to create one, and it might even remain unchanged.

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TITLE: "Death Rides a Pale Horse"

Temporary Logline: "After surviving a home invasion that killed her fiancé, a Choctaw woman falls for a man resembling her hero, Chief Tuscaloosa — only to be drawn into a deadly revenge plot leading to a final showdown with the gang leader behind the attack.”

Image created from the screenplay "Death Rides a Pale Horse".

In the back of my brain it is coming together. The outline is forming. Its going to be told linear, I have the basic 3 acts in idea now. I could put to paper the opening, the home invasion, all that until she meets the guy she falls for. Then it gets fuzzy.

I see the details only faintly, with a few scenes standing out clearly, then everything becomes blurry again. However, the more I recall it in my mind, the clearer it becomes.

It will be another 2 months to 3 before I start.